Tag: tom curl
member name: Tom C.
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September 22, 2007 06:55 PM EDT --
Pre-dawn, eyes hazy and blunt.
Sojourn to shower, familiar fount.
Bowing to spigot, library of liquid love,
of hot-off-the-press caress and solution-borne soliloquy.
I hike the heat by vanquishing . . .
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September 16, 2007 09:38 PM EDT --
malware spreads freely
read write permission granted
corruption assured
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September 02, 2007 08:27 PM EDT --
Summer is over and school is upon us
Colleagues for nine months a year are so happy
Laughing, relating vacation lies: honest!
Comfort in knowing that things aren’t more crappy
Set up . . .
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September 06, 2007 12:57 AM EDT --
This is based on a true story. I wrote this quickly and am again interested in critical feedback. Not only what do you like, but what do you think doesn't work. What should I change? . . .
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September 04, 2007 11:49 PM EDT --
Better? Worse? Please tell me what you think. I am experimenting, and would really appreciate critical feedback. Thanks!
Leisurely learning, loving my backyard . . .
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September 09, 2007 11:05 PM EDT --
Thanks to Jan H., Gerry Wass, John F. Walter, Ed Nudelman, Boris G. and John Beck for their kind help in pointing out how I might improve this piece. I hope this revision corrects those things, but . . .
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